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Partisan
Novice
Joined: Nov 04, 2001
Posts: 4 |
 Posted: 2002-02-07 22:45
Please, tell, that at me not so. What it is necessary to change? http://www8.kinghost.com/teen/young/lesbian/lesbians.htm
   
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Gel
Professional
Joined: Jan 30, 2002
Posts: 18 |
Posted: 2002-02-08 00:55
If possible use a payhost. I particularly dislike kinghost because of the huge dick top banner. It rather clashes with the rest of your gallery. Smutservers banners aren't too bad.
Clean up the language at the bottom.
My opinion would be to justfy the steps to the right. Plus be more carefull with the grammar. My own grammar isn't the best but you could try this wording.
FOLLOW THESE STEPS TO GET 100% FREE LIFETIME ACCESS
Step 1: Click on this link (add link)
Step 1: Select the yellow button that marked "FREE JOIN!"
Step 3: Fill out the quick 30-second survey. Details don't matter, but be sure to use a valid email address.
Step 4: Go to your email for a conformation letter
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Partisan
Novice
Joined: Nov 04, 2001
Posts: 4 |
Posted: 2002-02-08 13:52
Many thanks for the help.
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